Choose an important moment in the story for one of the characters and write a diary entry for that character (ie. what that character would put into his or her personal diary for that day when the important thing happened). Try to write in a style you think fits the character's personality.
Christopher just got to the train station and is about to go to London. While waiting for the train (he doesn‘t need to in the story but I chose this point to review his experiences)
I started writing this diary entry because I need to wait for my train and when I write diary entrys I dont need to look at strangers and see everything because there would be too much information for me to handle and I would start groaning again. But if I started groaning again some strangers would notice me and talk to me and I dont like strangers talking to me.
I will go and live with mother now until I go university because my father lied to me and you dont lie to people that you like. Also he killed Wellington and might kill me too.
So when I saw my fathers van parked in the car park next to my school I was sick again. But after I cleand the sick away from my mouth I decided to life my mother until I go to university so I needed to find the train station. I had to talk to a stranger but it was a mother with her son and at school they told us that women are less dangerous than men. She didn‘t tell me precisely enough where to go but I knew that if you are looking for something that is nearby you are able to find it by moving in a spiral. So I moved in a spiral and that‘s how I got to the trainstation. A nice policeman helped me finding the ticket office and because he was a policeman I felt much safer. Now I need to take my train so I can find mother in London. I think Toby will like it when I give him some more pellets of rat food.
(314 words)
Christopher just got to the train station and is about to go to London. While waiting for the train (he doesn‘t need to in the story but I chose this point to review his experiences)
I started writing this diary entry because I need to wait for my train and when I write diary entrys I dont need to look at strangers and see everything because there would be too much information for me to handle and I would start groaning again. But if I started groaning again some strangers would notice me and talk to me and I dont like strangers talking to me.
I will go and live with mother now until I go university because my father lied to me and you dont lie to people that you like. Also he killed Wellington and might kill me too.
So when I saw my fathers van parked in the car park next to my school I was sick again. But after I cleand the sick away from my mouth I decided to life my mother until I go to university so I needed to find the train station. I had to talk to a stranger but it was a mother with her son and at school they told us that women are less dangerous than men. She didn‘t tell me precisely enough where to go but I knew that if you are looking for something that is nearby you are able to find it by moving in a spiral. So I moved in a spiral and that‘s how I got to the trainstation. A nice policeman helped me finding the ticket office and because he was a policeman I felt much safer. Now I need to take my train so I can find mother in London. I think Toby will like it when I give him some more pellets of rat food.
(314 words)
Good job. It is written in Christophers' style!
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